Ringing of the Bards VIII: Red / Green / Blue
Primary colours have always fascinated me. Although red, green, and blue are only one primary grouping (as additive primaries), it’s probably my favourite, and helps me divide this weeks ten entries into convenient groups of three, three, and four, as blue would be my pick of them all. That said, we begin with red:
Red Poems
Ashraf of arch.memory sends in a poem most certainly in the red spectrum. He says,
Now my life is much too serious,
and yet the world around me isn’t.
You can read this line among others (should you desire, and I would argue you should very much desire) his poem “Cats”.
Daniel of Paper Tigers writes a black poem, but a very red one. In “Black Lung”, he asks,
While cursing coffers
That line their pockets
And the backs of their eyes
Danny from Diary of Silence sends in a poem very obviously meant for this week’s Ringing (how did he know, I wonder?). In “Cecilia’s Red Tears”, he paints and writes:
The red is falling
from a silken mask
Green Poems
It’s like you all knew the theme would be colours. Am I freaked out? A little. Erin of Poetic Acceptance presciently writes a poem called “Garden Still Life”, a brave place,
where, despite being twisted
and misshapen by the weather
the rosemary thrives
Robert (certainly not an Average Poet) goes ahead and makes the dictionary pay for its years of torture. But in a good way. In “Elemental Extrication” he finds that
Drops of buoyancy in the sea
cleanse away bleak misery,
determination’s bracing mist
invigorates my amity.
Tom, who is fighting Against Boredom, is in love. He writes simple words in “her reverse angelic”, but manages to explain how
she is slight but not softspoken: her words are teeth to shoulders.
she is a psalm unlike any i have seen written on my bedpost.
Blue Poems
Katy of Something Katy made me choose between four different poems this week. I went with the most familiar to me, because who doesn’t like familiar things? She writes in “Let’s Pretend”,
let’s pretend to be friends again -
_____we always wanted to be.
The other poems, of course, were just as good.
Hitharien of It’s Clever, But Is It Art? sends in a poem that coloured me blue, if only because I find a great deal of my history in the words. Though “Untitled”, the story of Dan is,
after so many months of anguish
with his eyes upon her face
that have been blind for years
the disease breaks forth
Billy the Blogging Poet (may I refer to him as The Godfather?) sends in this piece, that as I read it decided itself for me as blue instead of red. Thus, when he writes “On Dogs And Poets”, I see blue:
Poets, like dogs we fight for scraps,
little bits,
crumbs brushed off the tables
of the stars we emulate,
Last, but not least of all in my humble opinion, Daniel Barkowitz sends in a poem called “Maybe”. I’d like to think he’s asking a question. Like maybe we should start up a collective of poets named “Daniel”. Seems to be a good name. Quite apart from that, he writes,
Maybe it’s the turgid
way I have these days
of moving with my pre-
arthritic leg, my own
unbending in this humidity
To that end, I end this Ringing. You may colour your own thoughts on how the combination of the above makes the world vibrant – I won’t do it for you.
A note for Ringing#9: Katy has asked me to inform you that there are some submission guidelines to go ahead and work around. Have fun!




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Thanks for the colorful parade! What a great collection you’ve assembled. Many of my favorite colors are included!!! Now, how about a little purple?
Great Ringing! I can’t wait to read all the poetry!
Great job! And yes, you may refer to me as the Godfather as long as you kiss my gold ring when doing so. ;-)
This is a novel way of categorizing poems through primary colors. I love primary colors too; I mainly paint from these colors. Well done!
Green is not a primary color.
another fantastic ringing. i am so proud to be a part of this string of carnivals! primary colors strike such a natural and almost primal cord with me, with everyone i’d think. in fact, just a few nights ago while drifting off to sleep i was thinking about these three colors in comparison to the primary colors of pigments in art (red blue and yellow). i could possibly muse for hours over colors and the abstraction that color is, that we’ve made it.
as well, a damn fine collection of poems featured here this week.
bravo *dan!
Roger – note how I specified primary additives.
*dan
And to everyone else – I’m glad I could participate!
*dan
Hey Dan great job and a very colorful presentation. Thank you very much for your time and efforts!! Take care,
Bob
How fitting that my last painting phase was a blue one.
A wonderful way to categorise poetry. Thank you.