Imperfect

daniel on Aug 1st 2006

It was an imperfect circle
scribbled where seams meet
on an envelope;

how could anyone be
expected to do it properly
under those conditions

I wonder.

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2 Responses to “Imperfect”

  1. # Shirleyon 05 Aug 2006 at 5:38 pm

    Dan,
    As I’m struggling to visualize something I’m wondering if that is exactly the point!

    Shirley

  2. # Bobon 08 Aug 2006 at 2:28 pm

    Hi Dan,

    I keep reading this and seeing that circle but my mind keeps seeing it as a metaphor of life in general. A lot said with very few words, much enjoyed. Take care,

    Bob