Construction
Over scintilating skylines
tags lie to tie it all together:
our silver promises laid bare
and bitter at the bone
(though no one cares to
call it like it is).
We have built and are yet
building more, pushing
and foraging amongst thin
clouds and ozone,
spreading like blood
on the water,
but the closing lines of
this have not yet been
constructed.
![[caedmonscall.net]](http://rmfo-blogs.com/images/ccneticon.jpg "The quasi-official fan site of Caedmon’s Call.")
![[derekwebb.net]](http://rmfo-blogs.com/images/dwneticon.jpg "The official fan site of Derek Webb.")
![[rmfo-blogs.com]](http://rmfo-blogs.com/images/rmfoblog.png "About the [rmfo-blogs] service.")
It’s interesting… but I’m not totally sure about it yet. The second half is strong, but I’m not sure how the first half ties into it. Just my $0.02.
Merry Christmas!
December 21st, 2005 at 12:18 pmYeah, I’m not so sure about this one myself. Kinda don’t like it that much.
dan (strokes his chin)
December 26th, 2005 at 8:55 pm